Wednesday, December 8, 2010

SYZYGY - 6

INT. RESTAURANT


EYEBALL

So where did she go?


RAVEN

Probably the bathroom. Quit looking

over there. You’re going to attract

attention.


EYEBALL

All right, so what’s the plan?


RAVEN

We have the bartender page her, tell

her that her lights are on, and when

she comes outside we take her to the

irrigation ditch on the edge of the

parking lot.


EYEBALL

Isn’t that kind of out in the open?

Won’t someone see us? I thought we

were going to drive her somewhere.


RAVEN

In a case like this, speed it more

important than set-up. Besides, even

if anyone sees something, they won’t

act on it until we’re long gone. I’ve

seen it happen.



INT. WOMEN’S RESTROOM


Kara is leaning against one of the sinks, getting her Walkman out of her bag and hooking it up.


KARA

Why are you in here?


TOM

I’m sorry, but I can’t leave you

alone right now.



As she puts the headphones on, Tom moves over to the door and opens it a crack.


INT. RESTROOM HALL


Tom’s eye is pressed to the crack. He can only a slice of the dining area at the far end of the hall. Suddenly, Eyeball comes around the corner and Tom shuts the door. Eyeball stares at the door for a second, then goes into the men’s room.


INT. MEN’S ROOM


Eyeball enters, looking around. There’s no one there.


EYEBALL

Tom? Raven said you might not be

feeling too—


He ducks down to check for feet under the stalls. Nothing. He dashes out.


INT. WOMEN’S ROOM


Tom stares at himself in the mirror while Kara listen to the tape. She presses the headphones to her ears, bent over, softly crying. Tom walks over to her, puts his hand on her should. She looks up at him, tears running down her face.


TOM

Come on. We’ve got to get out of

here…


KARA

Who… who is she?


TOM

Just come on. There’s no time. She’s

going to figure out where we went.


KARA

(panicking)

She’s here?


TOM

Come on! We’ve got to go!



He starts dragging her toward the door, and she staggers behind him, trying to gather up her purse and Walkman.


INT. RESTROOM HALL


Tom and Kara come out of the women’s room and duck through the Employees Only door. The instant it closes, Raven and Eyeball come around the corner. Raven heads straight for the women’s room.


INT. WOMEN’S ROOM


The door flies open, and Raven swoops in. She checks everywhere. Eyeball doesn’t enter, just stands on the threshold, holding the door open. Raven looks at the mirror, sees her own reflection cut in half by a crack in the glass. She turns back to Eyeball, runs out into the hall and through the Employees Only door.


INT. KITCHEN


As Tom and Kara duck back out the rear exit, Raven and Eyeball enter. A COOK, a large man who Tom and Kara must have brushed past, is annoyed by another interruption.


COOK

All right, everybody out of my

kitchen!


Raven strolls right up him, that hard look never leaving her eyes. She looks at the rear exit, then the swinging doors that lead into the dining area.


RAVEN

Which way did they go?


COOK

Look, Missy, you just better get

yourself out of here right now.


RAVEN

I don’t think you want a broken nose.


COOK

And just how are you gonna do that?



Raven holds up her middle finger.


COOK

Oh, that’s cute. Now why don’t you—


Like a whip, Raven’s arm extends to its full length, gripping the man’s nose between her index and middle fingers. She pulls him down to her, twisting slightly. The cook yelps. Then Raven’s other hand raises, and she prepares to flick his nose. Under this much pressure, it will break if she does.


RAVEN

Now, here’s what’s going to happen.

I’m going to let you go. Then, instead

of being an asshole, you’re going to

answer my question. Sound good?


The cook nods, as much as he is able.


EXT. PARKING LOT - NIGHT


Tom is driving as he and Kara they peal out across the white gravel parking lot. Raven and Eyeball step out of the back door, and Raven immediately draws her gun. She fires four times at the car, but the shots only spark off the back bumper.


RAVEN

Dammit.


INT. KARA’S CAR - NIGHT


Kara ducks instinctively as Tom watches Raven in the rear-view mirror.


KARA

Oh God… she’s shooting…


EXT. PARKING LOT - NIGHT


The white gravel creates a smoke-screen behind the car as it tears out of the parking lot and heads out of town, toward the highway overpass.


RAVEN

Come on.


EYEBALL

Wait… wait. We’re not going after

them, are we?


RAVEN

You bet. I need her. You have a

better idea?


EYEBALL

(looking around)

Well… shouldn’t we… uh…


RAVEN

I hope you’re getting paid by the

hour, Kid. Let’s go.



INT. KARA’S CAR - NIGHT


Kara turns around has they drive under the highway.


KARA

Is she coming after us? Oh Jesus…


EXT. KARA’S CAR - NIGHT


Tom wheels hard to the left as soon as they’re out from under the overpass. Kara’s car skids up the grassy slope on the far side of the overpass. Halfway up, he stops the car and turns off the lights.


INT. KARA’S CAR - NIGHT


KARA

What the hell are you doing? Go! Go!


Tom grabs her and pulls her to him. She resists for a second, then stops as Raven’s car roars out from under the highway.


They watch as Raven’s car drives past their hiding place into the open country. The car slows a bit, then starts swerving wildly, sweeping its headlights across the wheat field on either side of the road.


KARA

(whispering)

What’s she doing?


TOM

Looking for our tracks. She thinks

we’ve pulled off into one of the

fields.



Kara stares after her in dread.


KARA

She really wants to kill me…


TOM

Yeah. But I’m not going to let her.



Tom shifts the car into drive and slowly drifts up the hill, around the guardrail and onto the rural highway. He speeds out of sight, not turning on his lights.


EXT. LAMPLIGHTER INN - NIGHT


From out of distance, a car approaches and pulls into the parking lot at a reckless speed. It skids to a halt. Jake jumps out, jamming a gun into his waistband. He dashes back and forth, looking for his wife’s car, but can’t find it.


JAKE

What the hell…?


INT. MOTEL ROOM 18 - NIGHT


Eyeball sits on the bed of Raven and Tom’s hotel room, staring blankly at the TV while Raven digs around, throwing things into her bag. Eyeball checks his watch, then pulls a gun out from his jacket and turns it over carefully, examining it and the silencer screwed into the barrel.


RAVEN

Nice piece, but you better put it

away.


EYEBALL

Why?


RAVEN

This kill is mine.


EYEBALL

Before we go, let’s give Big Ed a call.


RAVEN

All right. But that’s not going to

change what I’m here to do. There’s

no way I’m going to stop until she’s

taken care of.



Eyeball grudgingly puts his gun back in his pocket.


RAVEN

Good. Now hold on to this.


She tosses him a small calculator-like device. A glowing LED readout changes from 46.3 to 46.4.


EYEBALL

What is it?


RAVEN

How far behind we are.


EYEBALL

You bugged her car?


RAVEN

That’s right. That’s why we came

back. Tom left it here.


EYEBALL

So you think he planned this?


RAVEN

I don’t know. Maybe.


EYEBALL

(checking the tracker)

Wait, it’s stopped. Forty-six point

six.



INT. GARAGE - NIGHT


Kara stares at Tom across a table in the grimy waiting room of a mechanic’s garage. She’s pacing back and forth, as if in a cage. He just stares at the floor.


KARA

Do you feel strange?


TOM

Why do you ask?


KARA

Because I do. Wired, kind of. I can’t

really decide how I should feel.


TOM

It’s like everything feels more… real.


KARA

Yeah. It’s not good, but… I don’t know.


TOM

It won’t last.


KARA

Somewhere between high school and

now, Tom, our lives got seriously

screwed up.



He doesn’t seem to be listening. She looks out into the garage through a plate glass window. A MECHANIC is out there, looking at the car’s undercarriage while it’s up on the jack. When she turns back, Tom is leaning forward, his face in his hands.


TOM

We don’t have time for this. Why did

I do this?


KARA

(a little offended)

Well, I don’t know. Could it be that

I was about to get a bullet through

my head?


TOM

That never stopped me before.



Kara is stunned by this, then shakes her head.


KARA

I don’t even want to know.


The mechanic, a greasy, tired man, comes into the waiting area. Tom stands, anxious.


TOM

Did you get it?


MECHANIC

Sir, I don’t even know what I’m

looking for.


TOM

(sitting back down)

You didn’t get it…


MECHANIC

I’m sure that whatever you think is

under there—


TOM

I know it’s there.


MECHANIC

Well, I can’t find it. You can wait

until the day mechanic comes in. He’s

my boss. I’m just not trained for

this sort of thing.


TOM

When does he come in?


MECHANIC

Seven.


TOM

We have to wait six hours before

you can take a little box out of—


MECHANIC

Sir, I don’t see any little box.

You tried to show me and you couldn’t

find it either.


TOM

That doesn’t mean it’s not there!

Look, take it down. We can’t wait.



The mechanic shrugs and leaves. Kara watches Tom intently.


KARA

You’re really scared of her, aren’t

you?


TOM

No more than I should be.

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