Friday, January 14, 2011

SYZYGY - 10

RAVEN’S CAR - DESERT - MORNING


Raven looks down at the locator, which is wedged in the ashtray. It registers 112.8 miles. She looks in her rear-view mirror, where the sun is rising behind her. Outside, the landscape has turned to severe desert. Eyeball sleeps in the passenger seat, and he awakes with a start.


EYEBALL

Nuh!…


He looks over at Raven.


EYEBALL

I saw him… I saw his face. Over and

over… Jesus… is it going to be like

this every night?


RAVEN

For a while. It probably will be

harder for you. I at least could

convince myself that those men were

evil.


EYEBALL

I studied you, you know. The Organ-

ization has been going through a lot

of turbulence lately. You’re pretty

much what made Big Ed such a power

to be reckoned with.



Raven doesn’t respond.


EYEBALL

Did you ever wonder what all the

trouble is about?


Raven slowly looks over at him, then forward again. She takes a deep breath, and let her mouth start moving.


RAVEN

I got a job in an accounting office

in the middle of the banking district.

I was right out of college, ready

to show no mercy and take no prisoners.

That’s where I met Tonya. She was

the one who found out how our company

was really a front. We dug around a

little, then a lot, and when we began

to get some idea of how corrupt the

whole thing was, we decided to lib-

erate a few of those millions we saw

going by every day. She had the com-

puter skills, I knew the books back-

wards and forwards. We made off with

sixty thousand dollars… before we got

caught by Godfrey.


EYEBALL

You stole from Godfrey?


RAVEN

I only remember a few things about

that day. He kept saying how impressed

he was with us, and I remember his

smile. That Cheshire cat grin, as if

he were covering up something terrible.

He never lost that smile… even when

he shot Tonya. He told me he wasn’t

angry about the money, that it was

the principle of the thing. In fact,

he was willing to let me pay it back,

by doing twenty favors for him, at

three thousand dollars apiece. The

favors were people that he wanted

gone. In return, he let me live.

The only thing that kept me going

was the knowledge that I was killing

off parts of the thing that had taken

Tonya. It turned out that I had a

knack for it, and I think that’s

part of what made Tom fall in love

with me. I was a one-woman war against

organized crime. Then, one night,

something happened.



Fragmentary slow-motion flashbacks of that last hit, a man running across the top of a dumpster, a flashing knife, Tom slamming his fists against the steering wheel of her car.


RAVEN

(voice-over)

I woke up in Tom’s apartment the

next day. He had put me to bed, left

me a note that he had gone to his

work and that he’d be back in a few

hours. But I knew that I had an

appointment to keep.


INT. ELEVATOR


Raven stands dead still, watching the floor numbers as they rise to the top. Her face is a complete blank.


RAVEN

(voice-over)

After every hit, I would go up to

Godfrey’s office, and he would mark

off my debt in his ledger. But all

I could think about was the blood,

how thick and hot and bitter it was…


Raven draws her gun from inside her coat, holds it at arm’s length in both hands. She brings her eye, the muzzle of the gun, and the crack between the doors into an EXACT LINE. She waits patiently, completely still. The elevator stops, the bell chimes, and the door opens. Raven fires.


INT. GODFREY’S LOBBY


A security camera high in the far corner of the room explodes as Raven’s bullet skewers it. She swings her arms down, effortlessly shooting the lone guard, protecting a large pair of double doors, before he can react. She strides toward the doors, shooting the lock, then kicking them open.


INT. GODFREY’S OFFICE - DAY


Godfrey’s desk sits in front of a long, plate-glass window that runs from ceiling to floor along one side of the lush office. Godfrey sits behind his desk, stunned at the intrusion. Raven levels her gun at him. He smiles nervously, starts to get up.


GODFREY

Look, Raven--


She opens fire, never stopping walking toward him. Every shot hits him in the chest, pinning him to the chair. Some go right through him and shatter the window behind him. The chair starts rolling backward from the force of the hits, bumps into a low ledge and tips backwards. Both Godfrey and the chair flip right out the window. Raven walks around the desk, right up to the edge, still firing at him as he falls, until her gun clicks. There is still no expression in her eyes.


EXT. RAVEN’S CAR - DESERT - MORNING


RAVEN

Then I just walked out of there the

way I came in.


EYEBALL

Did anyone know it was you?


RAVEN

Only Big Ed. His men stole the

building’s security tapes and tracked

me down. But he didn’t want to kill

me. I had put him in too powerful

a position by killing his enemies

already. He was impressed. He said

he’d keep my secret and waive the

rest of my debt, if I would do this

one last job.


EYEBALL

Kill Kara.


RAVEN

Yes. That’s all. Should have been

easy.



EXT. DESERT - DAY


Tom’s car slowly approaches from the distance. From out of the heat haze, a small, semi-circular strip mall appears. At its locus, just next to the road, a thirty-foot obelisk stands, with the words MIDDLE OF NOWHERE written up all four sides in neon block letters that’s only barely visible in the noon glare.


The building’s architecture is faux Mexican adobe, and along the top of the facade are roman numerals reading from eight, on the left, to three, on the right. To the side of mall is a small gas station. This is where Tom pulls the car in.


INT. TOM’S CAR - DAY


Tom shuts off the car and unfastens his seatbelt. They’re both tired and irritable.


KARA

What is this place?


TOM

I don’t know. Are you hungry? It

looks like there’s a restaurant.


KARA

With her on our tail?


TOM

We’ve gotta eat, and I think we’ve

still got a good lead. Time enough

for a quick lunch, anyway.


KARA

Why don’t we just get rid of this

car? We can take one of those.



She motions to the few other cars in the lot.


TOM

Well, sure. Why didn’t I think of

that? You know how to hotwire, right?


Kara slowly shakes her head.


TOM

Me neither.


He gets out. Kara unfastens her seat belt and mutters under her breath.


KARA

Some fugitive you are…


EXT. MIDDLE OF NOWHERE - DAY


Kara follows Tom through the heat vapors to the tiny gas station building. The GAS ATTENDANT, a young man, sits in a plexiglass booth that has no room for more than a cash drawer and an air conditioner. A stack of paperbacks sits on the counter next to him, and he looks up as they approach.


ATTENDANT

Yeah?


TOM

You guys have a mechanic here?


ATTENDANT

Nope. No room.


TOM

How about full service?


ATTENDANT

That we’ve got.



Tom pushes a twenty through the metal drawer, notices a worn copy of “Something Wicked This Way Comes” on top of the stack of books.


TOM

Could you fill it and let me have

the Bradbury?


He points to it.


ATTENDANT

You got it.


TOM

We’re going to get something to eat,

so there’s no hurry.


ATTENDANT

Around here, there never is.



The attendant shoves the book back through the drawer, gives him a dead smile. Tom takes it and put it in his inside jacket pocket. He turns back to Kara.


TOM

Shall we?


He offers his arm, and she takes it. They walk to the door of the restaurant and step inside.

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